[ kanaya shakes her head ] Darling, I'm a professional, it's my job for people to care what I think.

[ but how professional she might be is hard to say, she can't be more than a year older than minako, after all. ]

It isn't wholly unsalvagable, I don't think, but it will need some rearranging. I wouldn't have engaged if I weren't willing to offer my consult.